Date: 2016-05-12 07:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] autumnia
Continuing with my reading...

By the way, I love how Harry notices things even when the adults try to keep their secrets from him; his magical awareness definitely growing as he does as well. Knowing his relatives were zombies, that the Lich did it and to not care at all (to be fair, I suppose they do deserve it after mistreating Harry all these years).

Heh, of course the tanned vampires must be foreign... and who in their right minds would ever believe the Vampires and the Werewolves getting along?

Ooh. An appearance by a young Kingsley Shacklebolt and Mad-Eye! I like how you're adding in more people from the Potterverse. It's nice to see how the new community in Little Whinging is affecting the rest of the magical world. I love how calm and clear-headed Kingsley remains despite the unusual nature of the incident. Nothing illegal going on but yet enough to spook so many merchants in Diagon Alley.

And you brought in Fudge and Malfoy too! With so much focus on the growing economy in Little Whinging, we forget how that impacts the magical world. Heh. Of course Malfoy has diversified his investments -- you never know where things may fail.

So Harry calls Voldemort by name and not 'You Know Who'. I do wonder if any of the other inhabitants of Little Whinging also refer to him by his name.

Hah. Snape's out on the front porch. Would love to see his reaction on finding Potter right there... if he hasn't been Obliviated yet.

This story is so much fun, Anya!
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